~ENGLISH STANDARDS~

(W) 4. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.

            An essay I wrote asked the following, "Talk about a time when you or one of your classmates were treated unfairly. How did you react? What was the outcome?" The way I answered this prompt was, there was time in elementary when my classmates were treated unfairly. They were treated unfairly by the teacher because she chose her favorite students to go on a field trip and not the other students. More than half of the class wasn't able to go and I find that very unfair. In my essay, I tried to use the appropriate vocabulary for my audience. Throughout the essay all of the structure was cohesive and easy to understand. Overall, my essay was clear and organized, while still using the appropriate style and vocabulary.